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科学论文写作与发表:分类句式用语
胡庚申 申云桢
(清华大学外语系, 北京 100084)
一、引 言
科学论文的写作在常用句型、用语方面有一定的规律可循。掌握这些基本规律,写作论
文时可收到事半功倍的效果。那么,常用的句型、句式怎样分类比较科学?通常用到的句式
为哪些类型?各种类型又有哪些基本表达方法? 所有这些问题,都拟在本文内例述和研讨。
为什么要掌握分类句式用语呢?因为,首先,这有利于避免不必要的重复。许多有用
的句型,通常出现在科学论文的不同部分,如表示研究目的用语,不仅在论文摘要中用到,
而且在引言、讨论、甚至结论等部分都会用到。如果我们在讲述怎样写作各部分时都列举类
似的用语,势必造成重复、赘述。现在把它们集中起来分类例述,就能避免不必要的重复。
其次,掌握分类句式用语有利于比较地道、规范的英语表达。把英美人写作论文时的句
式用语集中地进行分类选择,有利于广大专业技术人员和研究生们学习、模仿比较地道、规
范的英语表达,有利于节约时间,避免费力耗时地造出“蹩脚的” 、甚至“中国式”的英语
表达。
第三,掌握分类句式用语有利于写作中的多样化表达。把表达相同或相似概念的不同表
达方式集中分类,便于写作中选择、比较,有利于交替使用不同的句型,避免句式单调、用
词单一,实现表达多样。
再则,掌握分类句式用语也符合科学论文的写作规律。因为常用的句型是写作中客观存
在的,它们的使用已基本上格式化了,而且使用的频率又很高,所以对常用的句式用语进行
科学的分类,是一件有实用意义的工作。
至于怎样分类,这主要是从两个方面考虑。
一是从逻辑思维角度考虑。人们总是首先提出问题,然后分析和解决问题,最后得出结
果或结论。这可以看作是解决问题的一种“模式” 。这种“模式” ,也可作为我们分类选择句
式用语时的指导思想。
二是从写作程式角度考虑。任何一篇科学论文的写作,大都要:①指出其研究的目的,
②限定其讨论的范围,③说明其理论的依据,④描述其实验的步骤,⑤介绍其工作的方法,
⑥展示其研究的结果,⑦作出科学的评价等。这种基本“程式” ,正是我们分类选择句式用
语的实践依据。
鉴于上述,我们在本文内对科学论文写作中常用的句式用语进行了分类,并选择了 240
余条例句供参考。
俗语说: “熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟” 。我们深信,掌握英语科学论文写作中常
用的句式用语,无疑会有助于科学论文的写作。
二、 “指出目的”的句式用语
1. 主要用场
指出研究目的句型在英语科学论文中反复出现, 这类句型用语比较集中地使用在论文的
摘要、引言、讨论、结论等部分。
指出研究目的的常用表达有: “本文的主要目的……” , “该项工作主要是关于……” , “该
项工作的主要目的是……” , “该项研究的主要目的是……” , “该项实验主要是为了……”等
等。
1 2. 常用句式
(1)本文的主要目的是……
① The purpose of this paper is…
② The primary goal of this research is…
③ The intention of this paper is to survey…
④ The overa11 objective of this study is…
⑤ In this paper,… was provided (given,i11ustrated)
⑥ Our goal has been to provide…
⑦ In this paper,we aim at…
⑧ The emphasis of this study lies in…
(2)该项工作是关于……
① The present work is concerned with the processes underlying…
② The above work deals with the mechanism involved in…
③ Our work at present is devoted to the changes occurring in…
④ The work we have done bears on the effects produced by…
⑤ The work we are doing is closely related to the deliberations described in .
⑥ Compared with the current research,the previous work was in connection with the
investigation made by…
⑦ The work presented in this paper focuses on several aspects of the following…
⑧ The authors are now initiating some experimental investigation to establish…
⑨Our studies were performed to determine the amount of…
⑩The problem we have outlined deals largely with the study of…
(3)该项工作的主要目的是…
① The chief aim of the present work is to investigate the features of …
② The main purpose of our recent work was to examine the properties of…
③ The major object of their further work will be research into the nature of…
④ Our work in this direction has been intended to provide some information about…
⑤ The work which is being done now is designed to find some solution to the problem
of…
⑥ Work of this kind has been started in order to assess the role of …
⑦ Previous work in this area was initiated in the hope of obtaining data in…
⑧ We did this work hoping to establish…
⑨ The authors undertook the work with a view to show…
⑩ By doing this work we expect(ed) to demonstrate…
⑾ Doing this joint work, we intend(ed) to show…
⑿ The primary objective of our work was to define the reasons for redundant protection
systems and give examples of systems used in …
⒀ With research of many years, the author’s endeavour is to explain why in…
⒁The above-mentioned work has been performed with a view of …
(4)该项研究的主要目的是 …
① The chief aim of the present study is to find out…
② The primary object of this fundamental research will be to reveal the cause of …
③ The main objective of our investigation has been to obtain some knowledge of…
④ The study of …was made in order to clarify…
2⑤ The above study has been carried out to determine…
⑥ Their(pioneer)studies were intended to elucidate…
⑦ Those earlier investigations are in hopes of providing evidence for…
⑧ We performed this present study in the hope that we might bring to light some
facts about…
⑨ The authors attempted their studies in order that they might…
⑩ We undertook the above study to the end that we might…
⑾ They initiated the present study so that they might…
⑿ Carrying out this study we hope to find out…
⒀ Performing these studies the author intended to reveal…
⒁ With recent research, the author intends to outline the framework of…
(5)该项实验主要是为了
① We made these experiments in order to show a correlation between…
② The author attempted the set of experiment with a view to demonstrate certain
phenomena…
③ Experiments on…were made in order to measure the amount of…
④ Experiments involving…have been carried out to determine…
⑤ Experiments using this technique are (not )under way test(check) …
⑥ Experiments on…are made to answer the question whether…
⑦ The experiment being made by our research group is aimed at obtaining the result of…
⑧ We have designed such an experiment for the purpose of …
三、 “限定范围”的句式用语
1. 主要用场
限定主题范围的句式用语,在英文科学论文中常出现在“引言”和“讨论”中。限定主
题范围时的常用表达有: “该问题是关于……的研究” , “该问题在……范围之内(外) ” , “该
问题涉及到……范围” , “该问题可进一步推广到……范围”等等。
2. 常用句式
(1)该问题是关于……的研究
① This problem is concerned (chiefly)with the study of…
② The problem of …deals (largely)with the determination of …
③ The problem they have advanced bears on the elucidation of …
④ The problem to be discussed in this paper is related closely with…
⑤ The problem described previously was directed to the example of…, which differs
from…
⑥ The problem under investigation involves some significant agreements and disagreements
in…
(2)这是研究……的问题
① The problem concerned with the nature of…
② The problem relating to the influence of…
③ The problem which deals with the role of…
④ The problem which bears on the effect of…
⑤ The problem in connection with…
⑥ The problem as mentioned previously in…
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(3)该问题在……范围之内(外)
① The problem is within the scope of …
② Our problem lies beyond the range of …
③ The problem you have just outlined seems to be outside of the province of…
④ The problem the authors have raised goes off the limits of…
⑤ The problem I have referred to falls within the field of…
⑥ The problem under discussion is not within the scope of…
(4)该项研究涉及到……范围
① Studies of these effects cover(ed)various aspects of……
② Investigations on…involve(d) also specific situations.
③ Our studies with this technique are confined to one particular aspect.
④ More recent studies by this worker were chiefly concerned with the influence of…
⑤ The research on the conventional techniques explains well the phenomenon of
⑥ The new findings from the experiment agree to the result obtained in…
(5)该研究进一步推广到……范围
① The authors have extended their studies to some other related species.
② We hope to expand our investigations to include other materials.
③ The research we have done deserves further studies.
④ The investigation carried out by the experts suggests an increase of the application in …
⑤ The approach under study predicates a wider range of application.
四、 “说明理论”的句式用语
1. 主要用场
说明有理论根据的句式用语,在英语科学论文中常出现在引言、实验描述及讨论等部分。
说明理论根据时常用表达如下: “该理论是……提出来的” , “该理论的内容(特点)是……” ;
“根据该理论,可以得出……” , “该理论认为 ……” , “应用该理论能(或不能)说明……”
等等。
2. 常用句式
(1)该理论是……提出来的
① The theory of…was created 50 years ago
② The alternative theory was constructed in 50’s.
③ The theory of…was developed in the 1930’s…
④ The theory of…was elaborated in the early 70’s.
⑤ The theory of…was formulated as early as 1900.
⑥ The theory of…was advanced as long ago as the 1860’s.
⑦ The theory of…was put forward as far back as 1897.
⑧ The theory of…was proposed last year.
⑨ The theory of…was suggested the year before last year.
(2)该理论的内容(特点)是……
① Underlying this theory is the idea that…
② The underlying concept of this theory is…
③ The underlying principle of the theory is as follows…
④ This is an alternative theory that…
4⑤ This is a similar theory to the effect that …
⑥ This is a working theory which is based on the idea that…
⑦ A basic feature of this theory is …
⑧ The fundamental feature of this theory is as follows.
⑨ The theory is characterized by…
⑩ …prove to be the outstanding features of the theory.
(3)根据该理论,可得出……
① According to B’s theory both processes occur simultaneously.
② As follows from the theory by N, such situations lead to…
③ As can be seen from the theory and theory advanced by…such interactions are the basis
of…
④ In the light of the theory ,we have developed a variation method to handle such problems.
⑤ Based on the theory, the author has obtained sufficient information from recent
experiments with…
(4)该理论认为…
① The kinetic theory holds that…
② This newly-developed theory maintains that…
③ The theory advanced by…claims that…
④ The theory of …predicts that…
⑤ The principal concept of the theory lies in…
⑥ The investigating theory…
(5)应用该理论(不)能说明……
① We can interpret these findings in terms of the above theory.
② We cannot explain these phenomena using the above theory.
③ We can hardly explain these findings applying this theory.
④ These findings can be interpreted in terms of the above theory.
⑤ Such phenomena cannot be explained on the basis of this theory.
⑥ The theory can (not) apply to other cases of…
⑦ The theory developed by…is valid (invalid)for other species.
⑧ X’s theory proved to be true for all steps of…
⑨ The above theory has been verified by many other authors.
⑩ This very peculiar theory can be applied to a wider range of experiments in …
五、 “描述实验”的句式用语
1. 主要用场
描述实验过程的句式用语,顾名思义常用在与实验有关的段落之中。描述实验情况时的
常用表达为“该项实验具体包括……” , “到……,从未有过该项实验研究” , “进行该项实验,
以便检验……” , “该项实验证实(未能证实) ,……”等等。
2. 常用句式
(1)某项实验(所用设备)包括……
① The experiment consisted of three steps, which are described in Table 3.
② The test equipment which was used consisted of five force-measuring transducers and
two recording instruments furnished by…
③ Included in the experiment were a high- pressure vessel assembly, 2 UA –3 uranium
5analyzers, and a complete 100*50*50 cm soil bin.
④ All high-pressure hydrogen creep rupture tests were carried out in specially designed
high pressure equipment rated at…
⑤ The winch is composed of the following main parts: a welded frame, a safety-brake
clutch, a chain drum and a worn reducing gear.
(2)到……,从未有过某方面的实验
① An experiment of the kind has not been made.
② The kind of experiment you have in mind has never been carried out until now.
③ The kind of experiment you mentioned would not be undertaken in the near future.
④ So far we have not performed any experiment of this kind.
⑤ Until now the authors have not attempted any field experiments of…
⑥ Researches on the mobility of ions in neutral gases began more than 75 years ago, but
very accurate data obtained through actual experiments have not appeared as yet.
⑦ …However, no direct experimental measurements of this have been reported.
(3)进行该项实验,以检验……
① We (have)carried out several sets of experiments to test the validity of…
② They undertook many experiments to support the hypothesis which…
③ We initiated experiments to prove…
④ They have undertaken special experiments to disprove…
⑤ A number of experiments were performed to check…
⑥ Many studies have to be attempted to verify…
⑦ More than one set of experiments must be initiated to substantiate…
(4)某项实验证实(未能证实)……
① Experiments by M and his associates (have) showed…
② Recent experiments in this area (have) suggested that…
③ The present series of experiments (have) indicate(d) that…
④ The experiments reported here (have) demonstrate (d)
⑤ These experiments involving…confirm(ed) our evidence that…
⑥ Our experiments with…failed to prove…
⑦ These highly-technical experiments support(ed) our assumption that…
⑧ Our initial experiment confirms that the choice of concept is correct.
⑨ The above-mentioned experiment has proved the newly –developed technique is very
reliable.
⑩ This conclusion is also supported by the experiment as has been described previously.
六、 “介绍方法”的句式用语
1. 主要用场
介绍研究(实验)方法的句式用语,在英语科学论文中常见于摘要(资料型摘要) 、引
言、实验描述及建议等部分,介绍研究方法时的常用表达如: “该方法首先由……发明(使
用) ” , “该方法与其他方法有 ……差别” , “应用该方法可以进行……工作” , “该方法称
为……” , “使用该方法已获得……”等。
2. 常用句式
(1)该方法首先由……发明(利用)
① The method of … was first developed by N.
6② The method of … was first applied by B.
③ The method of … was first used by A in the early XXth century.
④ The method of … was first brought into used by C.
⑤ The method of … came into use as long ago as 1920.
⑥ The original proposal of this method was first made and published in 1963.
⑦ The method of making a frequency standard was not invented till the existence of…
(2)该方法与其他方法有……差别
① The method of … does not differ at all the routine one
② The method of we use differs greatly from the one used earlier.
③ The method they developed is somewhat different from the conventional one.
④ The new technique is quite different from the old one.
⑤ The newly-elaborated technique has something (nothing, little) in common with the one
previously used.
⑥ The method of deriving a program described here differs from previous practice in that…
(3)应用该方法可以进行……工作
① The method allows us to demonstrate…
② This technique enables us to observe…
③ The above procedure makes it possible to defect…
④ This method is capable of providing…
⑤ By the method we are able to investigate the insight of…
⑥ We have adopted the integrated filtering cell approach to miniaturize the prototype.
⑦ The method proves to be useful in…
⑧ The interpretation effects were successfully evaluated by employing AIA.
(4)该方法可称为(描述为)…
① The method used is known as…
② The technique we applied is referred to as…
③ The procedure the followed can be briefly described as …
④ The approach adopted extensively is called…
5. Since the method was first put in use, we might as well name it as…
(5)用该方法已获得 ……
① We have obtained this information from recent experiments with…
② Detailed information has been acquisited by the authors using X-ray analysis.
③ The researches have recorded valuable data using the newly-developed method.
④ The experts in the research center are satisfactory with the experimental results achieved
by the application of…
七、 “展示结果”的句式用语
1. 主要用场
展示研究结果的句式用语,在英语科学论文中常见于摘要、实验结果、结果与讨论及结
论等部分。展示研究结果时常用的表达有:“该项研究结果说明了……” , “根据该项研究结
果可以得出……” , “该项工作提供了……结果” , “该项实验取得了……结果” , “……概括了
该项结果”等。
2. 常用句式
(1)该项研究说明(指出、揭示)了……
7① The studies we have performed show(ed) that these particles are responsible for …
② These pioneer studies that the authors attempted have indicated marked variations in…
③ We carried out several studies which have demonstrated that the substance acts on …
④ The research we have done suggests an increase in…
⑤ The investigation carried out by…has revealed no resistance of…
⑥ Our research has supported the assumption that…
⑦ Their studies have confirmed the opinion that…
⑧ This research bore out the idea that…
⑨ Laboratory studies of…did not furnish any information about…
⑩ Our research carried out to the same effect failed to reveal any variations in…
⑾ Recent research into the nature of… fails to support the theory that…
⑿ Most recent studies showed no changes in…
⒀ Further research reveals no evidence of…
⒁ All our preliminary results throw light on the nature of…
(2)根据该项实验结果可得出……
① More recent experiments in this area lead us to conclude that the phenomenon is related
to …
② Most recent experiments to the same effect have led the authors to believe that the
mechanism is out of action.
③ Further experiments in this area have enabled these workers to suggest that…
④ As a result of our experiments, we concluded that…
⑤ From our experiments, the authors came to realize that…
⑥ From these experiments one can conclude that…
(3)该项工作提供了(没有得出)……结果
① This fruitful work gives explanation of…
② Their fundamental work provides some knowledge of …
③ The author’s pioneer work has contributed to our present understanding of…
④ This joint work of many years has led to further progress in…
⑤ Our integrated work of the past few years adds to our current concept of…
⑥ The research work has brought about a discovery of…
⑦ The research by workers (has) result(ed) in a solution of…
⑧ Our work on…(has) failed to give…
⑨ Their initial work with…did not result in…
⑩ This initial work with…did not result in…
⑾ Further work in this field failed to contribute to…
⑿ These findings of the research has led the author to a conclusion that…
(4)该项实验(研究)取得(没有取得)……结果
① Some results of…are obtained in the experiment with…
② Sufficient result for…has been observed with the new method…
③ Further progress can be provided by these experiments…
④ No clear advancement has (so far)been see in…
⑤ No direct outcome was then reported in…
⑥ No such finding could be available in…
⑦ No further result can be found with that technique.
8⑧ No experimental evidence has come to the studies of…
(5)某数据(图、表)总结(概括)了从……得到的……结果
① Figure 3 shows the results obtained form studies of…
② Table 5 presents the data provided by the experiments on…
③ This table summarized the data collect during the experiment of …
④ The results reported above have been shown in Figure1.
⑤ Our experimental data briefly summarized as follows.
⑥ Some of the authors’ findings are listed in tables.
八、 “作出评价”的句式用语
1. 主要用场
研究成果评价的句型用语,在英语科学论文中常见于:摘要,讨论及结论等部分。从狭
义上讲,研究成果评价是论文作者对自己所做工作的评价,从广义上讲,这种评价不仅限于
对个人工作的评价,同时也包括作者对别人的评价,提出自己的观点和见解。作出评价时,
肯定和否定是两种最基本的评价。
2. 常用句式和词语
① The author’s work on…has been very successful
② Our work involving studies of…did not prove to be encouraging.
③ The new information has been insufficient to indicate that the change is dramatic.
④ On of the assets of this technique is that it is very simple.
⑤ The theory by…seemed quite competent.
⑥ We consider the new idea quite likely a suitable one
⑦ The data available in literature are quite important.
⑧ The newly-developed method has certain advantages over the existing methods.
⑨ The author has satisfactorily come to a conclusion that…
⑩ These highly-technical experiments failed to provide any correlation between…
⑾ The theory of…did not explain how much modifications arose.
⑿ These findings are not consistent with the current theory.
⒀ The above hypothesis seems rather interesting.
⒁ So far there is not enough convincing evidence showing…
⒂ The data obtained appear to be very similar to those reported earlier by…
⒃ There may be a different approach to the above findings
⒄ Our experimental result does not seem to suggest the following assumptions
利用上述句式,表示肯定评价的形容词,如:good, satisfactory, competent, convincing ,
adequate, reliable, correct, valid, helpful, fruitful, successful, stimulating, attractive, interesting,
promising, exciting, careful;, profound, comprehensive, useful, encouraging, extensive, clear,
sufficient, etc.
表示否定评价的形容词,如:deficient, faulty, inadequate, incomplete, unconvincing,
unsatisfactory, meaningless, unreliable, incorrect, wrong, invalid, confusing, inexplicit,
contradictory, controversial, divergent, puzzling, conflicting, ambiguous, insufficient, etc.
英语科学论文的写作句型用词方面有一定的规律可循。为了避免不必要的重复,有利于
比较地道,规范的英语表达,有助于写作中的多样表述,并遵循科学论文的写作规律,本文
对常用句式用语进行分类选择。 根据表达科学研究成果的一般逻辑思维顺序和科学论文的结
9构程式,写作英语科学论文时常用句型用语可作如下分类:①指出研究目的,常用句型用语
54 条;②限定主题范围,常用句型用语 30 条;③说明理论依据,常用句型用语 36 条;④
描述实验过程,常用句型用语 30 条;⑤介绍工作方法,常用句型用语 32 条;⑥展示 研究
结果,常用句型用语 46 条;⑦作出科学评价,常用句型 17 条及 48 个表示肯定或否定的形
容词。实践表明,集中掌握这些常用的型用语,对于写好英语科学论文大有裨益。
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